1) Read your feedback carefully and then write a summary of it in your own words using WWW / EBI.
WWW:
- My statement of
intent is a good idea n matches the brief.
- It would interest
my target audience.
- I have an
advantage to get into the higher grades (5-9)
EBI:
- I need to add in stereotypes.
- Need to go into more detail & add meanings.
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2) Do you need to make changes to your narrative? Why?
Personally, I feel as if i need to make changes to my narrative because I feel as if I need to focus more on the main character in my advert and the other people that would be around them.
3) How can you improve the use of media terminology in your statement of intent?
I can improve my media terminology by adding stereotypes and subvert stereotypes into my statement of intent.
4) Representation & stereotyping was a weakness in some drafts. How will you address the key concept of representation in you next draft?
In my next draft I will address the key concept of representation by adding more detail.
5) Finally, think about audience. Why would the target audience (14 - 18 year olds) enjoy your adverts?
The target audience should enjoy my advert because most of them should be able to relate to my advert in the concept of trying to become up there and big or leaning towards the fact that they may have low self esteem.
